Poor Imp

Brief remarks here, because I've read it now a few times and always intended to critique. ^_^'' Malkin first, in both chapters -- He has to play the part of ...

How? ...Like Hell, right? Or where? At least it goes, you know...most stopped. -Tov -- Have you ever had to stop talking for tears or anger choking?...

Ha...I think I can understand why there was no reply, Jim. It's one of those questions. (Dan could be Jewish - and Spanish, and they wouldn't contradict, you know. He ...

Hullo Gingivere. Brian Jacques reader, by any chance? An inference from the name, of course. ^_^

All the time, right? Wait - serious question? Honest? -Tov Yes. -Aleda -- Do you have a duty to country and family? One above the other? No duty to either?

Hullo Myth! seems a certain duty, you know - I really ought to critique the Fools' Duel entries. ^_~ A duty, of coures, without any implication of being irritating - ...

cravat

knot

Sure... Away from some things, right? -Tov No. Not anymore. -Aleda -- Is it actually possible to have your breath taken away from you?

ruckus

...Or would I say? Maybe, right? If I knew. -Tov -- ...How old are you?

cacophony

whirl

...insurrection

The exchange between interrogated and interrogator - I very much like the suspense, resigned bitterness on the one side, impassivity on the other. It begins with immediacy, draws the reader ...